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Words might fill the silence1
but I would rather hear your breath
as in comfort you sleep,
after we have whispered hopes
and longing against the pillow

we share. All those words we speak
as if our tongues are the host
and tears are the wine of communion
taken at the altar of our union.
Our love absolves us of sin

and sorrow. Our strength
renews as kisses silence mouths
when we swallow the eucharist
and set down the empty cup
that defines
2 our redemption.

Dream in this after silence
as I whisper thanks and worship
each unspoken word you breathe.
 
 
1Separately Together, by Tristesse2 ©2006
2Notes found written to..., by unpredictablebijou ©2007.

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BikeWriterBikeWriterover 14 years ago
This put tears in my long white beard!

Thank you.

WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
~

I hope you will take this as a compliment. The poem isn't my cup of tea, yet I appreciate its beauty.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 16 years ago
I'm so glad..........

....I took the time to look back over the past few days to find this lovely work full of grace and tenderness. You spun gold again, girl!

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Marvelous

You never cease to surprise me. This a very good poem. It makes me feel warm reading it. BravO.

lorencinolorencinoover 16 years ago
Beautiful

As trite as this may sound, it's all that I can offer: "Beautiful."

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