- Non-Erotic Poetry
- thanks (to 22)
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my mind was so crowded with words
like legion
they flowed out of my eyes
blinding me
she took her blade
cut away
she pointed
"look"
"learn"
my vision, freed
crisp edges
clean form
a face without cosmetics
beauty
I bowed to my teacher
an eyebrow raised
tiny smile
"you still have much to learn"
- COMMENTS
twelveoonealmost 20 years agohope 22 saw it,
if its the 22
i'm thinking of
but i may be a few numbers off
Merrymakeralmost 20 years agoGood phrasing...pulls you right down to your knees ; )
Well done!
~Merry
Tathagataalmost 20 years agoTo find a teacher who " takes away" rather than adds.
Sounds like you found a good one.
(And very important to bow)
: )
Nice work
