- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Beast Within
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Click hereI was always there for you
Even though there were times I shouldn't have been
You always had me to count on
Were you ever there for me?
I tried to be the best friend that I could be
Listening to all your fears
Having open arms for a hug
I tried to show how much I cared
You always used me
You never wanted to listen to me
You never even cared
You always took me for granted
I put up with it
Thinking that you would come around
Never knowing your inner thoughts towards me
Not knowing or caring
There was so much that I wanted to tell you
I always wanted to tell you that I liked you
I never found the right time to tell you
There was so much that you didn't care about
The moment I saw you for you
The moment the fog lifted from my eyes
The moment I stopped caring
You jumped ship and never looked back
I don't get why you even went through the process of getting to know me
When you never even cared about me
When you only cared about yourself
When all you had planned was that
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agoIt is not the perception of others but the examination of one's self, good poem
dcpoet44about 18 years agoit reads like a diary entry, it's real. one has to like that. maybe for example in the area of being taken for granted, you could elaborate on how it feels - like for instance, the time that is spent picking up after you, or maybe the time you called and i stopped everything i was doing to come and get you in the worst possible snowstorm. simply examples or ideas. nevertheless i liked it. we all need helpful input....even i do too and it's always important to get feedback...don
RhymeFairyabout 18 years agoI like your thoughts here, just sounds a bit more like a letter. I think a bit of editing, would make a difference. The imagery is great. We know where the reader stands, and can see it unfolding. Very powerful thoughts. I hope I am being helpful and not a smartypants. Stick around, read and write everything, it gets better. * Smiles *
