The Beauty of Submission

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The Beauty of Submission

He stands there looking at the beauty kneeling before Him...her eyes lowered...her head held high...she looks up as He speaks...slowly rising to the beat of the music in His voice...trusting Him to do the right thing...giving her all...submitting in only a way she can...He smiles seeing the respect and honour bestowed upon Him by the girl...His eyes light up by her gentle swaying movements...so graceful so loving...she moves in one turn...walking bare foot towards Him...He gazes into her eyes and sees into her soul...Love, care affection the bond between T/them...A union so strong...she looks up into His eyes and then lowers hers again...she whispers to Him...Master how may i serve You...He smiles and asks for nothing more than a kiss...A sweet tender one...loving and gentle...she smiles happily and moves to Him...lips meeting...eyes gazing into E/each O/others...T/they stand there for eternity wrapped in E/each O/others passion...she moves back after the kiss and asks Master may i dance for you?…He looks and smiles..and nods.
His eyes light up seeing her start to move gently swaying in front of Him…she steps back slightly and her eyes gleam with pleasure…her heart alight with a fire…she starts to move her slender body in a figure of eight…slowly gyrating…showing her Master that she loves Him…her hands cross above her as she slowly transcends with the beat of the love in her heart…a true love as can only be shown to her One…she drops the white veil from her face…the veil showing her innocence and purity…and proceeds again to gyrate in front of the One she has chosen…her whole body moves around going from the floor upwards…she pirouettes around letting her fingers roam her body as she moves to the music of her heart.
He sits there looking at her…His eyes alight with love and pleasure…feeling honoured to have been her chosen One…she gently sways towards Him…her whole being on fire gyrating so gently…her hands crossed above her head as she lands at His feet…head raised.. eyes lowered she whispers…Master i give my all to You…He looks down and smiles…then reaching down He raises her to her feet…tilts her head up and looks into her eyes…I will give My love to you…My heart and My knowledge…T/together W/we shall grow and continue this journey W/we have started…she looks at Him tears of love in her eyes as she hears those words from Him…she gazes back into His eyes and then leans towards Him…Master i wish for no more than to serve You the rest of my life…hearing these words from her…He pulls the girl forward and swears upon His honour that never will there be another…T/they kiss again and look at E/each O/other B/both knowing that they had found the right O/ones…and T/together they continue in the journey of life.

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
AN ODE TO ACCEPTANCE

while still being a submissive with an explanation, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
smiles quite warmly reading it

smiles softly after reading it as her mind goes thru the posibilites wondering if the girl is real and what has happend to her if they are still together her heart aches with the moment of it

hoping to one day to do the same

she loves it

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