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- Erotic Poetry
- The Beginning of When
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Passport handed over
Smirking clerk
Uhm, no, no bags
Waiting
Nerves, nerves
Smell check
A knock
Pause
A kiss
Deeper
Are you sure?
No
But yes
Oh god
don't move
I need to feel you
I need to
Taste
Can I come on you
Oh yes
Anything
Pause
Waiting again
A door unlocked
Stumbling kiss
Harder
I need to see you again
When?
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Tathagataabout 9 years agoIt's all in what you don't say. And the phrasing like panting breath. Nice work!
