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With your wind at my hindmost, wondering
I'm wondering where you will sleep tonight
Long after our fight or any night
I wonder to the long magenta light;
Gone home resentful or homeless, cowed?
However I ponder, I think somehow
The twilight in-betweens are your home now.
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SweetOblivionover 13 years agoI liked this
I'm not sure about "wind at my hindmost" - seems an unfortunate combination of words.
And did you mean wonder at or wander to at line 5?
On the whole your verse still leaves a pleasant taste in the mind. S.O.
