- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Change
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You've changed me
And I'm terrified
I want to feel for you
But I don't know how
I can't breathe
When I think of you
You've stolen my heart
And seized my lungs
What is this change?
This panic I feel
When you're on my mind?
You've got me trapped
And I like it
But I'm so afraid
Afraid you don't love me
Afraid that you won't
Afraid that I'll lose you
And afraid that I'll be lost
If my heart squeezes now
When I have you
What would it do
If ever I don't?
Is this love?
This sickening in the pit of me
This shuddering of my heart?
I think it might be
I think I feel for you
I think I care
I think I love you already
I know I do
What the fuck do we do now?
- COMMENTS
steelkat29almost 10 years agoAuthorThanks for the advice Tod, I'll take it into consideration for sure :)
todski28almost 10 years agoBut your final line made me smile, all the apprehensions, questioning sudden followed by that sinking feeling of resignation,
The final question
What the fuck do we do now?
Was so good at invoking a sense of either a serious pleading question, or a sense of dammn now what.
5ed
Afraid you don't love me
Afraid that you won't
Afraid that I'll lose you
And afraid that I'll be lost
I'm not sure if you could lose the two afraid's in the middle of this.
Thanks for the read
