The Color of Night

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To you, The Greater part of I ;

Last night you lay, quietly sleeping
peaceful in your slumbers,
Your jawline finding trust
within my palm.

Such sweet dreams unto your lids
I wished,
Granted this moment to lay
silent with you.

Whispers fade to pillow secrets,
and the cradle of your arms.

Across your forehead I trace
the lines of your past.
Knowing that more than once,
you have felt the harsh wind
against you.

And now you trust,
to lay your heart to rest
here,
so deep inside of me.

I can't imagine not ever loving you,
or that you and I should ever part.

For I only remember
Your first kiss,
Your first touch.

I can only hear the way you say,
I love you's-
In colors only I,
can blend into rainbows.


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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Beautiful

Its beautiful Angel, as your spirit always is!

DuPainDuPainabout 16 years ago
*Word*

One word only ... *beautiful*

LadyLovesBlueLadyLovesBlueabout 16 years ago
Heartfelt

You captured the inner feelings of dedicated love that is difficult to express in words...and you did it beautifully.

Very lovely... Thank you.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 16 years ago
^

Very nicely done GA, and so good to see you back. Hope there are more coming our way.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 16 years ago
This ....

is beautiful. Being in love myself,

I felt every color

rise to surface,

spread like jam

and sing that soft melody

only lovers, remember

in the dark, way past

midnight.

Sweet my friend ~

Thank you for the journey,

it was breathtaking ~

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