- Erotic Poetry
- The Come-Down Rain
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Click hereWoman is a rail and chain,
held fast by man’s perversion.
She kneels in the come-down rain.
Blessed by his sick immersion,
she’s bent over shadowed beam,
held fast in his perversion.
Night flows like a steady stream,
deep in his darkest donna,
who’s bent over shadowed beam.
He baptizes false Madonna,
drowns his pleasurable ills
deep in his vessel, donna.
He drains into the well, and seals
her hard with dominate need,
that holds in his pleasurable ills.
He loves her more, indeed –
slave bound to rail by chain.
Filled with his dominate need,
she kneels in the come-down rain.
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copyright d. dixon
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- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agobut what I notice just at the moment is your skill with titles. They're tricky and you do them well.
In general too, this works as a very sexy but also very skillful piece. It's tough to write about power play and dominance and suchlike without going over the top. You manage it, again and again, better than anyone.
Anonymousover 15 years agoreminds me of that old movie baby face with barbara stanwyck...delicious...
LeBrozover 15 years agoThis poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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