- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The depth of my crazy
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I said to my friend
That you make me want
To experience the depth
Of my crazy
And perhaps,
It's all been
A fantastical dream
That never touched reality
Only the one I created
In my head
But
Coincidences
Coincidences
Coincidences
Too numerous to count
Lead me on
While confirmation bias
Confirms
So onward I press
Forward to the future
Even if the future
Is learning
The true depth
Of my crazy
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- COMMENTS
Desejoover 11 years agoYour poems have good flow and rhythm. I don't think the first line adds much to the poem, and you may want to consider selective use of capitalization.
Butterflies512over 11 years agoAuthorTazz, if it turns out I am crazy, I will be checking into the asylum. I promise.
