- Erotic Poetry
- The Devil’s Bitch
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The Devil's Bitch
She lures her prey into her coveted veiled web
Unsuspecting they never have a single clue
Those flashing alluring eyes and shapely thighs
Wearing a sensuous smile they would soon rue
Her breasts bulged out of an open blouse
Showing cleavage that begged a closer view
Braless with nipples popping and melon ripe
Not an imperfection out of place or askew
They would buy her drinks from a single wink
She toyed with them flaunting her lips and tongue
During witty chat her eyes would suggestively bat
While to each of her words they helplessly clung
Covertly down their pants her hand would prance
Setting a noose that none could loosen or untangle
Followed by a whispered word that only he heard
She massaged his libido with a deft tugging wangle
As if in a trance they would begin a slow dance
Her hand still conducting his throbbing erect wand
She would then kiss his mouth and bite wanton lips
Furtively into the night their souls she'd abscond
In her room they stood with their pants on the floor
While on her knees she taunted and teased in favor
With a quavering suck the scrotum readily pulled in
His entire package in her mouth to relish and savor
When she finally let him explode with his exquisite load
His screams could be heard for a Las Vegas city block
The pleasures experienced had such a numbing effect
He hadn't realized she had severed his balls and cock
She drained his blood after his last orgasmic flood
This mystical demonic Black Widow Vampire Queen
Gluttonous she ate his flesh and consumed his bones
The Devil's Bitch craves cum, blood, and flesh cuisine
An Original Composition by:
Quivering Quill
A Scribbles & Doodles Creation
All Rights Reserved
- COMMENTS
Quivering_Quillabout 11 years agoAuthorI always appreciate your constructive insights.... Thanks again Q.Q.
erectus123about 11 years agonow that you have cum to town. Yes 1201 does have a point, you might sharpen the poem on the Queen's teeth, its a long one with cock and balls, i.e. a mouthful, but I don't think crap is a kind assessment. Fantasy poems with a horror element are fun to read. You might rework this one and end up with a really beautiful reser-erection.The first two stanza's are fine. Often our first lines are the best. The last two stanza are nice but not as good as the first two. See what can be done in between. You have a wonderful imagination, here not so much original but bitting in the final analysis. Not every first draft or tenth will be representative of your best effort, as I was told once by a similar "bulging breasted" vixen at Toto's Circus Room, "You can't really be considered a whore until you have done it over a hundred times."
Quivering_Quillabout 11 years agoAuthorI write what comes...... I am humbled that there are those among us that are so superior.....QQ
SweetOblivionabout 11 years agoBut your fabulous "deft, tugging wangle" did made me smile and think I want one of those.
twelveooneabout 11 years agoAs if in a trance they would begin a slow dance
Her hand still conducting his throbbing erect wand
close to an original thought
seriously you are not getting paid by the word, nor the rhyme
what part of edit, do you not understand? what part of think?
how much stuff can you generate? why? your fan club, QQ?
I wrote better stuff when I was sixteen, even then, I knew it was crap
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