The distance between us

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The distance between us
is no space at all
We dance in the ether
I beck and you call

Like Marco to Polo
Or carrots to peas
The two of us singing
Our voices appease

Hearts bound together
By fire and heat
With compassion and love
Our souls are replete

Time is no obstacle
with you by my side
here in the ether
with no place to hide

Silence created
with loving intention
serves well the purpose
to give us dimension

Together we strive
for the future we see
we know it can happen
on that we agree

When this distance becomes
a thing of the past
we'll stand together
look back and laugh

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weepingangel88weepingangel88about 11 years ago
Give a voice

You lend a voice to the silence... Beautiful!

Butterflies512Butterflies512about 11 years ago
I really like this stanza

Silence created

with loving intention

serves well the purpose

to give us dimension

It really speaks to something inside me. I'll be interested in seeing more of your work.

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years ago

I like this, but it seems too...unrealistic. Life isn't really like this, life is gritty and rough.