The Dust Plum

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The Dust Plum:
Loved more, Lives less

Purple this tree, burned like a wart -
a wrinkle-rind mahogany with tractor-dust
upon its leaves:
each tick’s belly neither russet–grey nor blue.
Purple this tree engorged with spring.

He watches – a black street between –
his sister undressed one Crow at a stroke.
Ten yokes of youth – imposed by the seed –
mellow from green to fallow, between.

She, the bigger, with mustard leaves,
drowns the hydrant, crowds the heat,
and greedily fucks the sun god raw –

She bakes her candies orange from plum.
Sores on the mouth’s socket-tongue
suck nerve-blood brown down salted teeth.
Could she fruit a fig, she'd shred her sleeves.

She knocks her Mother's Clay - with knitting pins like hands -
and sinks her knuckles to their knobs in ferric, unfit soil.
An ape-man leaves this weed to spoil.

There is a Tree in Heaven, called the flower of paradise –
she'll catch upon your clothes and cling till death.
Cross the blossom once...incensed till death.

Hair, stones, ashes, shit,
tannic mulch, rainful fits,
a squirrel stands upon the barbecue pit.

And it is good to be writing,
good to reflect.

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Maria2394Maria2394about 18 years ago
enjoyed

and I wish there were a level between 75 and 100. I hate to leave a "grade" like this on such a good work. However, you lost me, something changed when you got to the Mother Earth part. I dont know what it was, the rhythm, or the rhyme, I will read again. Buut you have some marvelous imagery. The colors you describe are magnificent and the descriptions of hands and tongue..just beautuful work. hope to read more of yours :)

maria

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
yes

yes yes

this comment is of no use except to say

yes, this is good writing

hope to see more of my fellow southpaw

~aswirls

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