- Erotic Poetry
- The Feel
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Click hereThe feel of you beside me brings passion to my soul.
The feel of you inside me makes me lose control.
To feel your cock so hard and hot
Brings moisture to my hidden spot.
It titillates my clit and makes my pussy drool
I hunger for the length and breath of your manly tool.
Our hips slap out a rhythm as our passions rise.
Our tongues they dance together as we close our eyes.
We hear each others moaning to gauge our climax's near
We whisper words of loving in each others ear.
The feelings are exquisite with each thrust you give,
For moments such as these, my love, is why I love to live.
You fill me up completely with your love and cock
And when you withdraw from me I feel like I've been shocked.
The feel of loss is great, my dear, although our passions spent.
I hunger for our little man to once again give vent
To all the passion he does possess
And shoot his load deep in my nest.
- COMMENTS
UnderYourSpellabout 13 years agoyour meter is all over the place, writing in rhyming couplets needs lines of the same length. Try reading it out loud to yourself and see where you stumble
Kobaabout 13 years agoVery nice! For absolute certainty if my lover read me a poem like this I would be ready to go! I would be unstoppable! A 5 all the way for that reason alone! But I should add that it is very well written with very pleasant rhymess which make it even better. Nice erotic poetry!
