The Flowers

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oneiria
oneiria
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When the flowers turn on us,
it will be with silent screams.
The bees will dance a war dance,
with wolf fangs in their dreams.

When the flowers turn on us,
our towers will come down,
and we'll lie amidst the dust
with petals for our gown.

oneiria
oneiria
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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 13 years ago
OK......

......flowers should be left to grow in their natural surroundings or beware. I love this poem. No wasted words. A flower in its own right.

Tess

bulltlrbulltlralmost 13 years ago
5

The bees will dance a war dance,

with wolf fangs in their dreams.

being highly allergic to bees this makes me shudder...

I liked this very much!

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 13 years ago
shades of wild willy barrett

and his beware of the flowers of long ago. Nice. S.O.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
for what its worth

in my opin, (which is heavily discounted in some quarters) this is the best of seen from you, I like, I just don't feel like going into the reasons why. A hearty 5!