The Ghosts of New York

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Anschul
Anschul
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I don't really hate New York

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Two giants looming present although gone,
Cast shadows longer than their shadows were.
They darken the horizon at the dawn
In our minds. One looks, still expecting there
To see the columns reaching to the sky
Above the bleak surrounding cityscape.
Still a collective emotional high
Grips our conscienceness. We watch the tape
Again, again, yet trying to make sense
Of what was done. The images remain
Stamped in our mind's eye. Voices make us tense
And turn; we hear a strange mystic refrain,
The lost beg visitors: "Please don't forget
The price we paid." Their absence is our debt.

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 months ago

Sometimes I wonder if we have forgotten!

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
The most present an absence on this land

"Two giants looming present although gone,/ Cast shadows longer than their shadows were." With two lines eulogizing not only what was snapped from New York but what the whole nation have been grieving about -from that day on. So true, never have been an absence so present on this land...

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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An excellent form, the sonnet, with which to express such powerful feelings while not letting emotionality take it over the top.