- Erotic Poetry
- The Kings Men 2
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Click hereVelvety softness fingers grace
Gentle weight the palms embrace
Spongy curls caress a face
Whisper of soap and sweat to taste
Soothing kisses tension erased
Humid breath swirls out of cavern pitch black
Moistness inside a surprise attack
Blindly you plunge down a slippery slope
your demise stopped by a simple rope
Slowly, so slowly you pull yourself back
A deep breath and then you slide
Knowing where you want to glide
Repeat the process
One two three
The result
A bittersweet treat for me
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 11 years agozoyiab an admirable attempt, but you may be confusing a riddle in verse with poetry, there are no pointers or cues in place, there is not enough here so a reader may enjoy a mystery that remains a mystery at the end. i read it, refrained from commenting, not sure tazz got it
didn't vote
zoyiabover 11 years agoAuthorDesejo, The poems in this series are written to be vague enough that you can find many meanings depending on mood, and mindset while at the same time holding on to a slightly sensual feeling.
The bittersweet treat..... let's just say I think spitting is rude :)
Desejoover 11 years agoI take it this is part of a series about - dragons or something? The problem is that while you probably have a very clear vision of what is happening, it's difficult (at least I find it so) for the reader to understand. What is the bittersweet treat? Maybe I am being dense...
