the new angel

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I know you were given your wings today
and now you're waiting to fly away,
never have I met a more lovely soul
that is why you will be wearing a halo.

You better come see me from time to time
or you will have this little devil crying.
I will not cast a flower on your grave
I'll give them to you on my dying day.

When you held my hand you held my heart
seemed like forever even though now we're apart
we've shared life in almost every angle
now they are calling you to be the new Angel.

To templeminded (~_~)

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templemindedtemplemindedover 18 years ago
from your

talk about touching the heart.....to my angel from yours

love as always and forever...oh yeah, i look forward to bringing my spirit to visit you (big grin)

love you

your wife now and always

temple

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

I see what you meant in your note;

it still comes through as heartfelt.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Special ~

I love this one Art.

Again, your poetry is so powerful and speaks from the heart. We love Temp, and wish ... pray for her. I just cried, while reading this. Just had to say that. A very special poem of love, and the angels among us.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
moving.....

and there is some sadness, but sometimes it has to come out this way. and yes, she'll be the new angel. nice finish on this piece......overall.....nicely done......don

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
I'M SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS

Dear ZMA I am sorry about your friend. I will say a prayer for her. Your poem is very nice about her!!!

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