The Offering

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logophile
logophile
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Written for my pirate, with my heart.
Many thanks and eternal gratitude to rhinoguy for taking my fitful words and turning them into the beautiful illustration below.

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The fruit is offered to him -
a tribute for all he’s endured.
Not payment; because nothing could approach
the value of what he has given.
Just a gift, brought to him with a bow
and lowered gaze
in gratitude and respect.

He wants to proceed slowly, to savor.
It’s been so long since he’s been given an offering of this quality.

He’s starving and exhausted
Worked into a state of utter deprivation.

Her soul urges him:
Take it
Claim it
Use what you need.
It’s all for you, every bit.

He lifts it from the altar of her love
The husk parts easily under his thumbs
and nectar runs out over the split
coating his hands in fresh sweetness.

The tender inner flesh is pink and glistening.
Enticing.
The scent is a powerful drug drawing him in.
He pulls it up and into his mouth,
addicted after the first taste.

He plunges in, fiercely devouring the tribute.
The juice runs down his face
splashes against his chest
covering him in its organic goodness:
The smell, The texture, The flavor.

He falls to his knees
lost in the joy of receiving the tribute.
Grateful to the giver.
Grateful for the gift.

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THE GIVER IS BETTER

for the receiver taking, TK U MLJ LV NV

Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
Blimey!

I mean . . . Blimey!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Sounds like the perfect offering, succulent and sweet.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
love

Rhinoguy's illustration provides the dessert. The poem ~ a sweet gift to the man she loves. Endearing and quite charming!

gotwood49gotwood49about 19 years ago
wow!

logo, this is wonderful! I love the imagery, even without rhinoguy's illustration. This poem, expanded, could have been a good story, but you kept it sparse, sharply worded, and oh-so-erotic! Nice job!

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