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Click heremoving from couch
sleeping bag atop sleeping bag doubled
over comforter facing west
to window seat made of plywood board hard
with doubled sleeping bag
as dark as I can
witness outer spaces
solar lawn lamps
barely worth it
except the romantic halo of yellow
puddles suggesting a scene
for coming July
and july never came again for you
Long Live Literotica so I can visit you when I can
The words are strong yet sparse,
the images sharp,
but I am missing any more theme
thsn a night of looking out a window.
I really like these lines:
"except the romantic halo of yellow
puddles suggesting a scene
for coming July"
This is a real poem and it should be taken to the post office and officially stamped "poem" then shipped off to a publisher.
imagining you in these places-somewhere
between wishing you more cushion
and glad for the remaining hardness that keeps you
coming back, solid