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oxalis
oxalis
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moving from couch
sleeping bag atop sleeping bag doubled
over comforter facing west
to window seat made of plywood board hard
with doubled sleeping bag
as dark as I can

witness outer spaces
solar lawn lamps
barely worth it
except the romantic halo of yellow
puddles suggesting a scene
for coming July

oxalis
oxalis
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annaswirlsannaswirlsover 6 years ago
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and july never came again for you

Long Live Literotica so I can visit you when I can

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Other side of what?

The words are strong yet sparse,

the images sharp,

but I am missing any more theme

thsn a night of looking out a window.

I really like these lines:

"except the romantic halo of yellow

puddles suggesting a scene

for coming July"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
real

This is a real poem and it should be taken to the post office and officially stamped "poem" then shipped off to a publisher.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
halo

imagining you in these places-somewhere

between wishing you more cushion

and glad for the remaining hardness that keeps you

coming back, solid

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