The Rasta Man

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The rasta man
was old and very black
with long grey dread-locks
in a semi-affluent city
where multi-culturalism was celebrated
but at the time,
an actual black face
was a great rarity

he sat on a late Fall bench
near the front
of a vast park
filled with hundreds of trees
planted and fastiduously
labelled and described
over a century...
the ground beneath many
was now strewn
with leaves pink, yellow,
and red

the somewhat liberal city
had been swinging reactionary
for some time
so it wasn't such a great set-up
for a "drug dealer,"
the dread appelation
the Rasta man earned
for selling generous dime bags
of pot and opium

I liked the Rasta man
not only because I broke
up my college studies with
pot and, for the first time, opium
but because I wondered
where he was from...
with his foreign accent
and the gentle "soul"
that showed through
the scary business he did
(there being well-paid
undercover cops and a vicious jail
to make sure
that drugs were only sold
behind closed doors
by the more affluent)

Did he come from a jungle
or a grasslands
or a vast city
in which somewhere
a lone Starbucks could
be found?

The Rasta man came
like a pink moon
or a scout from
the Bohemian civilization,
saw that the winds
were cold
and was gone within a month

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PoissonSurLaLunePoissonSurLaLuneover 12 years ago
Cut it down!

After reading a few of your poems I have to say that you have some really beautiful images and ideas, but you let them get washed away in torrents of pointless expository. Work on building your strengths and not spreading yourself thin!

WillowedCabinWillowedCabinover 12 years ago
I dug the last stanza.

Not sure about the rest of the poem though. I'll come back later and reread.