- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Reverend
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The Reverend keeps her virgin;
not for him removal of a God-given hymen.
Though he climbs between her legs
and enters her, he just moves
enough to slake the lust he can't deny,
Or sometimes he uses another portal;
praying and begging forgiveness
throughout the long night.
- COMMENTS
sassynycover 15 years agothis poem stoked my curiosity, plenty. right off, the wreak of scandal wafts from your words. now i'm dying to know if "she" is a parishoner. makes it that much more scandalous. the second line read awkwardly to me, but the whole poem left me wanting more.
champagne1982over 15 years agoThis is so twistedly good. I always read your poetry with an English accent so I guess I missed the quirkiness of the way the poetic voice sounds to the North American ear the first time I read this poem. I think you should consider building a series or longer poem from your character, The Reverend.
WickedEveover 15 years agoThis is really interesting. I like the combination of sex and religion. I'm a little, tiny bit confused by line two. Maybe I'm reading it wrong. "not for him removal of a God-given hymen" Is the word him suppose to be there? In the first line, how about virginal? Those are just two small things that aren't very important, because the poem is good and, personally, it appeals to me.
