The soul of a lost son

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Is there no greater pain,
Than the loss of one so dear.
The darkness pouring rain,
And trying to keep him near.
The pureness of his soul,
That shone its light so bright,
Coming to me now,
In the darkness of the night.
He guides me from the dark,
While the pain is slowly eased,
Watching over his family blood.
He shines so bright and stark,
Keeping his spirit pleased,
With guiding us through any flood.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
"There no greater pain..

Than the loss of one so dear"... which always brings heartfelt sorrow

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Touching.

A tragic look at the loss of a loved one.

Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
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The message here is strong.. and painful. I would break it up into stanzas so it really wraps into the soul of the reader.. give them time to digest the truth of what you write... hit home to me.. for I know loss and the pain..

blessings

Du~

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