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Click hereFresh scent of rain
Distant thunder
Sending warning
Of a storm approaching
A sudden gust
Cool damp air
Skies turn black
Heavens release
Washing away the dust and heat
Fury of the storm
Unleashed like a tempest
Wind lashing
Lightning flashing
Reminding of untamed passion
With gentleness it starts
Long slow deep kisses
Soft gentle caresses
Passion surely slowly increases
Touches more firm
Warm hands roaming… seeking
Turning into Wanton lust
Beyond hot and uncontrolled
No match to the fury of storm
A Tempest let loose
A Sorceress gone wild
Her passion untamed
Gone mad with desire
Only one can quench this thirst
And let loose her desire
With his soft touches
And with his sweet soft kisses
Only He can calm the storm
That does dwell within
This verse much better than two others of yours I looked at today - "My Love" & "You Mean." Stronger imagery and nice transition from storm to passion. "Felt" a bit rough around the edges, but hey, it's all subjective.