The Sun

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blazing forth through frozen void,
by power of atoms all destroyed
golden orb which rules our life
cuts the night with sharpened knife.
blazing fires o’er miles and miles
our synapses, they waken
as retinal displays be shaken.
hues galore
from land to sky, sea to shore
our gaze
always amaze.

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3 Comments
Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 19 years ago
brilliant!

I loved the rhyme and the meter, though it stumbled toward the end. Made me read again.

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
This sun...

shines with powerful rays of bright imagery.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
oh yessss

I really liked this

blazing forth through frozen void,

by power of atoms all destroyed

golden orb which rules our life

cuts the night with sharpened knife.

Fantastic stuff!

Thank you.~ J

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