- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Tapestry Hangs Before Me
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Click hereTHE TAPESTRY HANGS BEFORE ME
when i look
at the words
woven in the fabric,
love stands out.
but see,
it needs a place
where comfort resides-
a poetic declaration
threaded out of life.
tragedies of yesteryear
become explorations
written in metaphor.
sometimes understanding
is all it takes.
there is strength,
a caricature-
omnipotent and alive.
it needs you
and the work
will be complete.
- COMMENTS
sackalmost 19 years agoYou might want to substitute "yesterday" for "yesteryear". The latter word seems a bit out of place and time in this poem.
ferociouskittycatover 19 years agoNow all I need to do is learn how to do one so well ;-)
Great job hon. >^..^<
sandspikeover 19 years agoThis work is smooth and rich and feels good as it touches
you. Nice call blackwood.
