The Wine Offering

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My sweet lover gives me shelter
From the elements, she lights my
Nights with living love,
I give her my body and soul every night.
Our female bodies come together
Lightning strikes her enemies down
And thunder alerts our alies that we
Have mated.
She offers me her breast, I my lap for her
To rest her weary head,
So that she can sense my femininity.
I sense hers and we join, blending
Our hearts together, one beat, one
Rhythm.
We breathe each others breath as our
Faces caress soft perfect skin.
Through this we do not make love to each
Other, we make love together,
Creating an energy that will rise
From our union and heal the world's ills.
I bathe my sweet lover in wine and offer her
To Dionysus, he will take her to Zeus for he will
Immortalize her in the stars!
As we kiss I can see the night sky in her eyes
And it is glorious!
Not even Sappho, queen of Lesbos
Could write a poem about her beauty,
Please my lover wear your crown of flowers
For me.

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

This is wonderful. It felt like a dance between two lovers intertwined. My only quibble is

"I bathe my sweet lover in wine

and offer her to Dionysus

who will take her to Zeus for he will"

would have sounded more like music to me.

Wonderful poem!