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I tell you

Every river has a song

and we listen for the notes
of each waterfall that tumbles
down the mountain
all the way to Gunpowder river.

You lean in closer
then wide eyed in discovery, you cry

I hear it! I hear it!
The river is singing Willow's song!
Can you hear it Mommy?


I once I sang to you this unwritten music
and today, you gave it back to the river.

How is it, my baby, you can already hear my voice
in the harmony of the waters?

It is Mother's day at Gunpowder Falls.
You know where to find me when I am gone.
I want for nothing more.

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sophia janesophia janealmost 19 years ago
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Excellent, as always!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
deja cool

I love a poetic series

where we going next MA'

I like Gun Powder river

duckiesmutduckiesmutalmost 19 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 19 years agoAuthor
ha!

my brain did not even pick up the extra I, typo indeed, thanks for pointing it out

as

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
I have to agree with b'brig on this one...

I, too, paused at that line thinking it was perhaps a type-o, but then reading it again, I feel it is the perfect flaw {if it ever WAS a mistake} and I would not change a thing. The meaning of the poem was flawless and that's all that ever matters to Me. Cherished motherly visions were felt by this another motherly woman and I thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece today, as <smile>

Mommy Vixxx

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