- Non-Erotic Poetry
- theory of island biogeography
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Click herethe girl's got bangs
and even when you lift her hair
to stare into the murk
that is her irises, you fix
on that one little, greenish fleck
where you hope that life
has somehow taken hold
will grow and thrive
and even colonize
like in the galápagos
it did
and then you think
one thing more: finches
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 16 years agoWho is the you? If it was me I wouldn't be thinking of finches. Is the you, you? Careful with the personal pronouns. It hinders here.
Bill Dadaabout 16 years agoDidn't get an E???????????? Oh well, I need to check out more of your poems.
LeBrozabout 16 years agoAnd then you think, and well you should, when reading this thoughtful piece. Just look at what Chuck has wrought.
Angelineabout 16 years agoTwisty and concise and powerful. Shoulda got the other E today. :-)
