- Erotic Poetry
- This Is
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This is...
Not the chaste lovemaking of winter
Night clothes pulled down and lifted up
Deference to the cold.
This is...
The time when passions rise
White linens tangled on the floor
The most conscientious of lovers stripped to their most carnal.
This is...
Naked flesh shimmering with a salty glaze
Moonlight glowing on an undulating back
Slick thighs sliding
This is...
Arms locked, fingers twined, the only anchor on a sweat soaked sheet.
Cries of delicious anguish muffled by mating mouths and heavy air
Dirty words panted into the dark
Fuck me
This is...
Hips bruised by a punishing rhythm
A voice made hoarse by begging for more and still more
Don't ever stop
This is...
Reality made hazy by air low on oxygen, high on humidity
Every breath an opiate of sweet, sinful sex
I love the smell of us.
This is...
The thin veil of politeness shredded by digging nails and clenched teeth
Titanium cocks pounding napalm pussies.
This..oh this..
This is summer lovin'.
- COMMENTS
foehn2almost 17 years agoI thought there were a few things here that made this not one of your better submissions, but then, I love spinach, even if there is a little sand with it.
I got to the adjective "carnal" and my mind wanted to see a noun after it. Just habit, probably.
And I'm of a divided mind, about the final word, "lovin' "...
It makes a powerful ending, but doesn't quite seem to fit with the prior elegance of the poem. Nevertheless, it's all so good. I doubt my praise means much, but I found it quite lovely.
unapologeticalmost 17 years agohttp://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23371207#post23371207
