- Erotic Poetry
- This is Me
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Click hereStand up and take notice
This is me not her this time
I'm the one that longs and aches for
your touch...your kiss....your cock
I am the one
half Angel
half Whore
Do you have any idea what you
have in store?
Your hunger I will suffice
with long rhythmic stokes
as I mount you and ride
Deep deep inside of me you cum
I cum...together it's ecstasy
And when your ready
To my wet cave I will lead you
so your tongue can explore
what makes me weak
what will make me yours
In stolen moments
In time I will try
To give you what
you've been missing
what you so desperately need
It's not too late
It's not too far
This is not her this time
She's the one who's nightgown
you fumble to raise in the dark
Can you remember last?
The one who's moans are not
from pleasure
The one who turns her head
into the pillow and counts
No I am not her this time
Give me one time
Just one time
This is Me
- COMMENTS
Safe_Betover 15 years agoI want to like this poem a LOT. Correcting the spelling error (your should be you're) and the unnecessary words would make me love this piece (God, can't believe I'm say too wordy.) I'd REALLY like you to bring this poem to the Poetry Feedback & Discussion Forum (http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25) so that some of the really excellent poets there could share their opinions. Thanks.
