Throat Fucker

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triara
triara
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Throat Fucker

I feel your hands in my hair
Holding me tight
My mouth full and throat blocked.
I cannot breathe.

I have learned to relax
I hang between your hands,
My life entrusted to your care,
Your pleasure chooses the paths we tread

I let go of fear,
Caught and impaled
The security of your hands
As you drive towards my heart
Is the anchor to my world.

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
The title.....

.....really put me off and I almost - ALMOST - passed by but I'm glad I stopped to read. Good descriptives even if it isn't a very pretty picture.

Tess

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Very sexy visualization as I closed my eyes after reading your words...just imagining.......

Well done!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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Could do with cutting out every line starting with 'I' but that's just being picky very clever and erotic well done

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
I agree

that the beginning bodes ill but the end is very good. Look for the undexpected angle on an erotic poem--it makes it stand out from the crowd:)

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
honestly

I expected a really bad rhyming poem ( as so many erotic poems are) but was pleasantly surprised. I like your use of verbs for the most part because an active poem draws the reader in better. Hope to read more from you :)

~ maria

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