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Click hereThroat Fucker
I feel your hands in my hair
Holding me tight
My mouth full and throat blocked.
I cannot breathe.
I have learned to relax
I hang between your hands,
My life entrusted to your care,
Your pleasure chooses the paths we tread
I let go of fear,
Caught and impaled
The security of your hands
As you drive towards my heart
Is the anchor to my world.
.....really put me off and I almost - ALMOST - passed by but I'm glad I stopped to read. Good descriptives even if it isn't a very pretty picture.
Tess
Very sexy visualization as I closed my eyes after reading your words...just imagining.......
Well done!
Could do with cutting out every line starting with 'I' but that's just being picky very clever and erotic well done
that the beginning bodes ill but the end is very good. Look for the undexpected angle on an erotic poem--it makes it stand out from the crowd:)
I expected a really bad rhyming poem ( as so many erotic poems are) but was pleasantly surprised. I like your use of verbs for the most part because an active poem draws the reader in better. Hope to read more from you :)
~ maria