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- thunderheads at 11 am
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Click hereapril morning,
flying over oklahoma,
puffy towers rise
in the bright sky.
the flight gets bumpy
and a killer is born.
later that afternoon
it will call upon
farmers’ wives
busy with chores,
small boys on bikes,
and school girls
who will huddle in gymnasiums
and pray.
- COMMENTS
Kobaabout 13 years agoWow! Like your other post today, this is very impressive! You are a very talented poet! Simple basic everyday words are used to describe an impending event so full of horror. The understating brings out the power of the storm even more. Beautiful use of language! I loved it! Please post more!
Anonymousabout 13 years agothis anon thinks this is random discriptions, rather boring, not even close to being one of your best
theognisabout 13 years agoI wonder if you meant "schoolgirls" instead of "school girls." It's a five either way.
twelveooneabout 13 years agowhere's the witch
I gave it a 5, with 2nd thoughts everything blows expectantly
but I am beginning to wonder where is the beach? in oklahoma?
