Time Tentacles

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oneiria
oneiria
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Humans blossom out of humans
     like flowers out of flowers
          or worlds out of worlds,

a writhing mass of spacetime spaghetti,
     our pasts wrapped tightly around each other,
          skin on skin, desperately seeking

the lost vestige
     of our perfect root.


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TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
String theory?

I like this, though "spacetime spaghetti" seemed a little silly for the poem in general. That's perhaps just me, though.

It also made me think of the Flying Spaghetti Monster.

Interesting poem.

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 12 years ago
The inexorable Law of Karma , baby....

It's the inevitable axiom : do unto others as thou wouldst have others do unto thee !!

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WOULD A CLONE OF ANY

be a match for some. TK U MLJ LV NV