Tonight

byLucy1970Harker©

Tonight

I pretended it was you
My eyes closed so tightly

I pretended it was you

He doesn't care.
You don't care.

And I came.
And I cried.

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by Anonymous05/09/14

i ached for you

Lucy Harker, when I read this delicate little poem my heart just ached for you. Even though it's a while ago that you wrote it, I felt your sadness as if it was five minutes ago.

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