tough old bird

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keacreme
keacreme
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i have known wildness,
                                  at 98
                                  tiny like a mushroom
                                  and solemnly pucker-mouthed.
but
                                  hell raises itself to surround her,
                                  when angry.

                                  hands crinkled like old paper,
                                  they blow in the wind
                                  of her breath.

                                  at 98
                                  every action
                                  is a statement of power
                                                         of life
                                                         of endurance
                                  and of the motion of time passing.

wildness
                                  is breathing
                                  when everyone says
                                  moss
                                  grows on your
                                  north side.

keacreme
keacreme
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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Very interesting poem...

that certainly leaves food for thought...well done.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Your creativity and originality never ceases to amaze. There are so many ways to read this that keeps rereading it fresh each time.

Maria2394Maria2394about 17 years ago
I hope

I am not missing the point of the poem, I truly enjoyed it.

I especially like the layout and how you can read the left-column words in a different order alongside the right side and get new meanings.

I have been reading through your submissions, so far I have not been disappointed. Keep up the good work!

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