Trussed

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CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Interesting

This is a very interesting presentation. Nice work.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A TRUSS IS MULTI-FUNCTIONAL

building, medical and ties. TK U MLJ LV NV

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 17 years ago
Original platform for another text?

The fingers image put on top of the visual which is an image in and of itself here, was stretching it a bit too much for my imagination. Ditto, for the struggle of light and dark. Ths really looks like a structure in a process of construction. What was intriguing was the use of space for the poem and the picture itself. I would have tried another poem with the same image -but with stronger loyalty to the visual qualities of the image this time.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 17 years ago
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This is interesting to look at. Cool. Perlin? I think you need purlin.

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
poetry forum

i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum - wildsweetone

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