- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Truth or Test
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Does he speak the truth buried in words
Or is he testing me, pushing my limits
Seeing how far he can force my patience
How much it would take to break me
Little does he know, he can’t
Nothing can shake my commitment
I am his, his to mind fuck
His to fuck fuck
His ‘til eternity
Even if it means waiting
‘til eternity
To be together
For he is my true love
and nothing can change that
- COMMENTS
freakyfreaky469about 11 years agoIt's true, this poet sounds very passionate about her true love, a lucky man to have such a passionate sweetheart.
She also sounds very young, I imagine she'll realize at some point that eternity is far too long to spend with one person, but why should we spoil it for her now?
sheawaitstrueloveabout 11 years agoAuthorI am very passionate about my true love, but I am harmless...my words sometimes aggrandize my situation, but what's life without a little "oompf"
erectus123about 11 years agoor is the word obsessive? ; but nice strong passion, like a poem one writes before killing one's lover; also, do we get to mend relationships in eternity? I was hoping to meet some new people...... technically well done but a little scary, but perhaps a fictional rant I hope
