- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Trying another read
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Click hereThrowing caution
to the air I conceded
I need another read
Chaotic and wild they spiked
Returning to a teasing delicate swirl
Finally with an arbitrary dive
They landed in illegible array
On the paper,
Crump!!!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agoi am enjoying your poems.i am amazed by the number of reader there are for them(all poems in general).these people really give thoughtful feedback.thanks m.
DawnJabout 16 years ago...it must be good! At least, that's what I'm thinking. It's Friday night, 10:10 p.m., and after a two-hour commute, to be able to read puzzling poetry and realize "I need another read" is a GOOD thing! Means the ole brain is still sparking...or something!
I'll be back for another read...once I am properly awake!
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoAuthor1201, thanks, I'll take what I can get :) and thanks to all who kindly and honestly shared their views!
twelveooneabout 16 years agowell who am I to disagree with Wicked Eve, and I will try another read to see what I am missing, till then consider it a bell curve 100.
LeBrozabout 16 years agoGood ending, describing so well the fate of most words written while keeping it short.
