Two if by Air

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The postman did not carry me; I clung
to the wing of a night bird

over the greening gray,
skating over state lines
and medians,
over treetops, through branches

diving down and down bee
lining your driveway.

Here the segue to interior
(skip the sofa)
where we slid into one another--
honey into beeswax.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
*****

Five.

AngelineAngelineover 11 years ago
Lovely poem

Especially like the first three strophes where you make the reader feel the flight.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 11 years ago

Everything about this felt wonderfully light and smooth.

buttersbuttersover 11 years ago
prefered the first half but

that's your fault with the gorgeous night-flight description. clever, the bee/lining and that honey/wax smoothsoothing into one another. very ... malleable!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
DE-LIVER ...THE LETTER

cum sooner, later or better. TK U MLJ LV NV

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