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bluerains
bluerains
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You are my bridge
between home
and the blank face in
the water,
floating like a jellyfish.

You hold me here
in the weightlessness
of morning coffee
as I hang on the edge
of eternity.

You churn my seaweed mind
into the realm of your today
even if I seem a million moments
away....

Your pattern bribes my heart
to stay for you another day
just to breathe the holy dust
of your instant.
______________

bluerains
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4 Comments
MayhemLassMayhemLassalmost 18 years ago
excellent

your imagry always delights but "the weightlessness of morning coffee" is truly inspired ...really enjoyed.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
a blue charm

like a saphire only a gem of a poem (~_~)

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 18 years ago
I like this ...

just to breathe the holy dust

of your instant.

~~~~~~~~~~

Great imagery in this poem, and you brought it home with that last line. One of those poems that makes one sit and ponder ...just float along with. I loved it Blue. You truly do have a poetic passion for words and imagery.

Just beautiful~

Sissy Adele HowellsSissy Adele Howellsalmost 18 years ago
well written

Enjoyed reading this poem. Not to long and kept my interest.

love your imagery especially "seaweed mind".

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