Unanswered Love

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I see your eyes glistening so bright
When I see you my heart fills with delight.
You love compares to that of a river,
It flows continuously and never ends which makes me quiver.
I never want you to leave me here
If you leave I swear I’ll shed a tear.
The love that we share is like no other
I hope that you won’t love another.
Come let’s watch the stars from above
And I’ll fly away like a dove.

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crazycattcrazycattabout 18 years ago
So close!

I really did like it, and it all flowed really nicely except for that one line... I thought maybe:

"Flows unending and makes me quiver"

Very heart-lifting though, made me smile, thanks! :)

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