Unbroken Circle

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Swish
the door closed
leaving in its wake
confusion
pain
heartbreak
sadness
Though all that I didn't see the open window,
yet its soft breeze caressed my skin

Soothing
comfort
still I didn't feel the full of it
only that I was surviving

Thud
the window closed
As the door again opened
letting in the sweetest breeze

Rejoicing
reveling
at the sense of it
the soul
rejuvenates

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
good words

Here:

Though all that I didn't see the open window,

yet its soft breeze caressed my skin

Did you mean through all that?

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