- Erotic Poetry
- Underneath the full moon
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Click hereUnderneath the full moon
Underneath the full moon
You’ll always hear a howl
Your lover is coming but
You don’t know how
You lie and touch your body
And sigh in happiness as the
Wind tosses your silk cape
Softly it floats tickling your skin.
Your eyes are like emerald gems dancing in the light
Your hair is red like a flame bursting into life
Your body is pale as the moons light
Your breast are perfect not mark in sight
Your legs are long like the ballerinas dancing in the night
Underneath the full moon your lover calls
Walking from the woods you beckon with your call
Slowly he steps forward he dressed like the night sky
Slowly he lowers he has come so far
Slowly you kiss him trusting him well
Underneath the full moon
You find you’re self-awake
Slowly you rise and look across the lake
Your lover is watching you knowing your safe
The lord of the full moon has taken your virginity away
Underneath the full moon you’ll always hear his howl
The child you have given birth to will sing and howl
Underneath the full moon your lover smiles
And sings for his lady and son with his howl.
- COMMENTS
unapologeticalmost 17 years agoHowever, it needs work. I think your choice of topic is a good one, but your execution leaves something to be desired. The repeating of words at the beginning of lines got a bit tiresome. Also, either leave punctuation all the way out, or use it more. Overall, though, I think it could work.
