- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Unmoved
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Click hereSitting all alone, motionless
She thinks she's going nowhere
But she's moving very fast
Speeding inexorably
Through both time and space
Her destination is unknown
But she'll get there soon enough
All she has to do is wait
- COMMENTS
theognisover 11 years agoAuthorThanks, Harry, Tazz, and ishtat.
Tazz: Round and round she goes; where she stops, nobody knows.
ishtat: As a result of your comment, I'm submitting an edited version that may be an improvement.
ishtatover 11 years agoLiked this, 5, but a slightly clunky start with. "She" at the start of both the first two lines? How about "Motionless, alone, she sits."
