Unrequited

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HarryHill
HarryHill
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Sleep, Sweet, sleep
Dream of some other more experienced lover
Tortured, I fade quietly from sight

Turn, Eyes, turn
See no more the pale skin of her page
unsatisfied by rough hand and tongue

Break, Heart, break
knowing no matter countless yielding times
no possession of her will ever be thine

Cry, then try again to turn her back to bed

HarryHill
HarryHill
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
what

chip said 5ed

one small nit, Sweet and Heart can be capped, as pet names? Eyes?

buttersbuttersover 11 years ago
harry - this has something

something elegantly sorrowful, and like you're plugged into shakespearean in its message - a message that will reach out to touch anyone who writes and so has endurance over time.

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years agoAuthor
The careful reader,

will never see that this offering is a personal comment about a love affair (with poetry)

and I have a suspicion that D101's 'A Fool's Deserts' held much of the same

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
UNTIL ONE FINDS THE TRUE SOUL MATE

only bad habits have to suffice, TK U MLJ LV NV