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Click heresay nothing
listen to what I ask,
tell of our love ... us.
show me love, hold my hand
wipe these scalding tears,
from my eyes. Never
let go ... of us.
do I ask too much?
never show ... enough?
tell you what I want,
no I do not ... No,
not enough.
I never say, how it feels
to see your smile, feel
your gaze on a warm
sunny morn. to bring
you coffee, for the rest
of our days. Yes, that's
what I want.
slow kisses, snuggled
deep in bed. warm sensual
slides, legs ... thighs
giggles of laughter, hot
passionate love ... Blazing.
heart to heart. eyes locking,
bodies ... one.
every breath, is for you.
my soul, lonesome, withering
in anguish, for what could
should have been.
step back in time. revisit
our courtship. slowly walk,
to the end of that
"what we once had" road.
we are not over. Never
will that day come. I will not
allow you, to give up, on Us.
Unless,
it is what
you truly want.
us .... a perfect subject with your charming literary way <grin> nice poem RF
I like it a lot, but the end was a bummer. I would loose
the last three lines. I know they might be the reason
for the piece, but I say don't give the sucker a way out. sandspike
Another gem you have here,
You always manage to capture
the essence and feelings of
love the same way I would.
You write beautifully of true
love and longing and it touches
my heart every time.
Nicely done my friend.
~ Jenn