- Poetry With Audio
- Vertical Blinds
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Glimpse the white striped fragment of sky
its distant grays ascend to blue
as I, window bound, subdivide
glimpse the white striped fragment of sky.
Blinds like bars imprison my eyes
bind me in each vertical hue
glimpse the white striped fragment of sky
its distant grays ascend to blue.
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoI'll never look at my verticals in the same old way again....
Tzaraabout 18 years agoTurning the lights out and playing this on Media Player with the "light show" effects puts me back in the 60s.
In a good way.
Now where are my Jefferson Airplane albums?
Anonymousabout 18 years agoNice work. I'm not usually fond of repetition in poetry, but I really enjoyed it in this poem. Thanks for sharing and keep writing! :)
WickedEveabout 18 years agoThe music was rather subdued until that first "striped fragment of sky." That made my eyes wide. :)
After listening to the audio, I had to take a quite moment to read the poem. The words alone are very good.
