Viewing Blossoms Outside the Window

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Equinoxe
Equinoxe
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Milk-white blossoms adorn trees
in soft contrast against green;
How can this place feel lifeless,
but that home is nowhere seen?

Equinoxe
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KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
Wherever you go there you are...

I love the nature images. Still, the "home" and the strong contrasting "but" left me eager for enlightenment by more skilled readers (or a patient poet) reg. their place in the poem.

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