VilleSonnet: Grasshopper's song

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(VilleSonnet, an idea sparked by The_Fool and Angeline (grasshopper))

Grasshopper's song

I sat and listened to the grasshopper,
not far from me I heard her chirping song.
It filled me with peace as if I belonged.
Her tranquil melody rang a heart throbber.
A light breeze blew across the meadow
but didn't drown out her poetic song.
I sat and listened to the grasshopper,
the sun rose higher as it got hotter
as water rippled in a still ponds pool.
Hearing the vibrant ringing out sound,
her tranquil melody rang a heart throbber.
Keeping me pinned to focus on reality
I meditated on her words and smiled.
Sitting in non-silence for just awhile.
I sat and listened to the grasshopper,
her tranquil melody rang a heart throbber.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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I don't understand this type of structure... but the work here is stunning.. you always amaze me dear friend... love your writing..

Du~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Thank you again

for this poem and for letting me be a part of you wanting to write it. I can't think of a better compliment than being compared to something in nature that gives another a feeling of peace and tranquility. You are very kind and I am glad we understand one another. xo, Ange

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Peaceful.

A serene description of nature's sounds. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
not my type of verse

but,, you play a fine tune with words...blue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
!!!

Ville-sonnet is poetry!!! And you did a mighty fine job with it too. There wasn't a thing I didn't like. Smooth, babe, smooth!

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